I just read a few pages from a short story called "The Phantom Coach" in a book called "Great Ghost Stories". Although I found this story very detailed and easy to visualize, it is very slow and not to the point; therefore, I am not a big fan of this story. I prefer a book that is more direct and gets the point across much faster.
I think you won the prize for first to post, but you are going to have to give me more than 3 sentences. And aren't ghost stories all about the tension and suspense? Is it slow because of that, or is it slow because there is NO tension??
ReplyDeleteI would have to say it was slow because there was not enough suspense. I'll work on adding more sentences in my next post!
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